tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1277856999971587545.post5011636697055425096..comments2010-12-02T11:48:42.159-08:00Comments on SophiaC92: background- still working on itSophiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04114403866326532583noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1277856999971587545.post-64937070360038501042010-11-30T07:11:29.565-08:002010-11-30T07:11:29.565-08:00Good start. Keep writing! A couple things: check t...Good start. Keep writing! A couple things: check the date on the independence of Cuba in your first paragraph: is 1989 what you mean? <br /><br />Even when you're giving background, try to be a little more specific: how did Castro come to overthrow this governemtn. "Many" citizens left Cuba in 1959 - how many? Which citizens were more likely to leave? Why were they anti-Castro? What do they do with these anti-Castro feelings? As you flesh out the specifics, introduce and use your sources. <br /><br />Good clear writing - I look forward to reading more.Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.com